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September 30, 2012
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:iconhavensgonemad:
So i am joining the contest last minute :P i redid the marker bust thing. I did it digitally and did soft shading no black outlines except for the eye. I kind of like how the after image turned out. In the after image she looks more mature which i really like. So anyways. Enjoy ^^

old drawing ----->
new drawing --->

I would love some comments on how i did on this. Tell me. How much did i improve in the two years between drawings? What more can i improve on? Don't sugar coat it.
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Wow, you've really improved! The anatomy of the newer piece is much better than that of the older, and the shading is a lot better. I really love the hair, and the eyes on both pieces are nice.
I think that there's still room for improvement, though. (This part is going to be about the newer piece.) Some of the facial anatomy looks a little weird, like the nose. I can't put my finger on why, but it just doesn't look quite right. The left shoulder (viewer's right) looks a little strange, too. I think that it might be the way that it's raised and the size in comparison to the other shoulder.

Overall, great improvement, and good luck in the contest! Keep up the awesome work.
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=Riemea Oct 9, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
You improved a lot! The proportions as well as the shading are much better. The shading is especially better in her hair. Well done! :)
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~JulijanaM Oct 8, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
you have definitely improved! Shading and coloring appears a lot smoother, hair is really good :) keep it up :) :hug:
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:iconhavensgonemad:
thank you very much for your comment. I appreciate that you took the time to comment on this
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~JulijanaM Oct 9, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
you are very welcome! :)
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~komozeck Oct 8, 2012  Professional General Artist
it looks much more clean and elegant. but i think you can use some contrast touch as old one (maybe a dark area on nose etc) also using texture is good but if you add some shadows after that it will looks much more 3d (texture will be looks more belong to picture too)

i like the highlight on old one (at the cheek) you can carry this knowledge to new one. its looks very good :)

bye :)
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:iconhavensgonemad:
thank you very much for your critique. It is quite appreciiated
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~komozeck Oct 8, 2012  Professional General Artist
pleasure for me :)
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